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What I Didn'T Do

I only regret what I didn't do

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 9:15:00 PM

you know what, this one liner is VERY deep!!!

Amy Green

Date: 5/1/2010 9:36:00 PM

Ok, new poet I haven't seen yet.... I like this. Very much!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2009 11:29:00 PM

But we can't go back. We can only go forward and hope there won't be any regrets. Keep writing. Sara

John Freeman

Date: 10/3/2009 11:33:00 AM

Yes, I totally understand, it is the omissions in our life, sometimes rather than the commissions, that cause great pain. To ourselves and others, as we forget to forgive others, as we wish them to do unto us! Life is not perfect, but the power of love is, let our lives be "the power of love in action." As we live and forgive. Sincerely, love, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 10/2/2009 3:22:00 PM

Clever write Kimberly >> James

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 10/2/2009 6:53:00 AM

wow such a tease. There are so many things I can project onto this one liner. whatever you didn't do, it must have been something you wished you did/someone you wished you did it with/ something you wished you didn't say to soeone who couldn't handle it. there are so many regrets to choose from in my head. this monoku is my vehicle as it would be for any reader. thanks for sharing.

P Sheart

Date: 10/2/2009 6:15:00 AM

Hi Kimberly Yes, I often wonder which is worse, regretting what we didn't do in this life or not knowing how to love, live. A very thought provoking Monoku. Thanks for sharing. Have a great weekend! Love Light Truth Patricia