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What Goes Up Must Come Down

Fly high above Consequence. Make your great escape on a psychedelic carpet through humdrum clouds of mundane life, to a state of "I don't give a damn" euphoria. Throw caution to the wind with the plunge of a syringe and no thought of it's cleanliness. Now, come crashing back down through a fog of regret, to the diseased bed that awaits. Wallow in lies and cover yourself with deception. Tell yourself, all is well; you don't have a problem, as you reach for the needle once more. 02/23/2016 Contest: What goes up must come down Sponsor: Catie Lindsey

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Date: 3/15/2016 12:24:00 AM
Hi Arlene, Congrats on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/9/2016 12:50:00 AM
Another lovely win dear Arlene.. big congrats!
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Date: 3/8/2016 10:21:00 AM
Intense, very strong write, Arlene.
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Date: 3/8/2016 7:24:00 AM
Hi Arlene. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/7/2016 8:02:00 PM
Excellent take on theme, well written and thought out, creative, and true. Congratulations on your win! A 7.
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Date: 3/7/2016 2:28:00 PM
Wow!! Very deep, and to the point, Arlene, congratulations on the “What Goes Up, Must Come Down” contest a 7: ) Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/7/2016 12:52:00 PM
Arlene, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *Smiles*
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Date: 2/24/2016 6:43:00 PM
Great job - love the last sentence wrap up clarifying that yes, indeed, 'they' will come down. Great take on the theme. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 2/23/2016 1:46:00 PM
So what your saying if i throw a chicken leg up i the air it will eventually come down and land in my mouth??
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