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What Feeds the Cold

Barren fields of November Corn stalks ragged broken soldiers bleak beauty stripped of green Beige bones on autumn's carpet Margins of daylight that disappear blending frost to the pinched ground Corrosive wind like a wet slide of mourning seamlessly folded into what the landscape feels Crows circle in their swoops of survival seeking the scarce sweet zones of lost kernels Momentum to snatch scraps, bits of decay in field rows that crack like smiles Under a moody sky, gravestone gray sparked by the cawing of crows that scrubs us clean in the exit wounds of autumn.

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Date: 10/28/2022 6:45:00 AM
Dear Brian, I am enraptured by your creative and stunning artistry! Your exquisite metaphors and similes take my breath away. "Corn stalks ragged / broken soldiers" and "Beige bones on autumn's carpet" Wow! Such mournful yet vividly beautiful images that enthrall and move my heart's imagination. I especially adore "in field rows that crack like smiles" and your last line "the exit wounds of autumn" such a powerful grand finale to an extraordinary piece! You capture the demise of the fields and the dry crackle of the cold lean season with stark images that are rich with atmospheric and emotional resonance. You are one of my favorite poets here and one of the best poets on this site. Your astonishing and impressive imagery wins me over every time and I treasure your poetic finesse ever so much. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan P.S. a fav!!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/28/2022 5:55:00 PM
Dearest Susan, I can't thank you enough for your most encouraging, supportive words. Your uplifting words give my pen + motivation a much needed push after a string of NA's. Your kindness is truly extraordinary. My appreciation seems like shallow light when juxtaposed with your truly gracious appraisal. Sincerest regards always. Brian
Date: 10/13/2022 7:51:00 PM
Brian, your word choice and creative use of metaphors and similes are very thought-provoking. This is a Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your win on Mile 16 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 17 has already started.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/13/2022 9:05:00 PM
Thank you, Mark, for the recognition. Gratifyingly, the creeping cold of November inspired the write. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 3/6/2021 5:39:00 AM
Beautifully penned Brian. I'm glad to have begun reading your work. :) Linda
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/6/2021 7:36:00 AM
Hello Linda, Thanks very much for your kind words. I appreciate your time + effort in reading my work. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 12/17/2020 6:56:00 PM
So expressive, very well written.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/17/2020 7:29:00 PM
Thank you Belden. I am happy to have discovered your fine work + look forward to reading your new submissions. Hope all is well with you. Brian
Date: 11/18/2020 4:53:00 AM
Expressive and emotive work. I like the flow as well. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/19/2020 2:51:00 PM
Hi Sara Your comments are most appreciated. Be well. Brian
Date: 10/31/2020 5:57:00 AM
Very expressive and descriptive winning work. Congrats. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one today. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/31/2020 8:14:00 AM
Thank you Sara. Cluttered fields of broken corn stalks with crows above encouraged the write. Best wishes Brian
Date: 10/30/2020 3:40:00 AM
I cold feel the coldness in your poem..
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Date: 10/30/2020 2:28:00 PM
Greetings Thank you for responding to my submissions. I have a low profile on Poetry Soup, so comments are always appreciated. Stay warm. All the best, Brian

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