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What Dreams Are Made Of

In the darkened attic, cold wind hisses Drifting through mist of unfulfilled wishes. The urge to stray climbs on hurrying ticks, Cold wind hisses in the darkened attic. Keepers of light, they open her desire Promising hope, lost dream she will acquire As remnant of fear leaves the rabid night, They open her desire, keepers of light. From heart’s window, footsteps quiver To saunter onward and claim dream’s flicker Rips of long nights soon abate her sorrow, Footsteps quiver from heart’s window. Slowly her fire roams, hands pick stiff brushes Fingers tracing easels of stars’ splashes. In this world, inner passion finds true home Hands pick stiff brushes, slowly her fire roams. … . …….. . . (c) *Swap Quatrain : each stanza is a quatrain where the first line is reversed in the fourth line. Kim Merryman’s 'What Dreams are Made Of ' Contest 31 July 2012

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Date: 7/31/2012 8:58:00 PM
Isn't this swap quatrain form awesome, Nette? I have used it several times in the past and I just love it! You did a great job with it. I hope I can come up with something as nice!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/31/2012 8:16:00 PM
Now guess what my dreams are made of........
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Date: 7/31/2012 8:15:00 PM
Wow.....an amazing write Nette....just love it!!
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Date: 7/31/2012 4:38:00 PM
Fabulous write, Nette! I have never seen this form written like this. Love it!!! Best wishes in Kim's contest...love and blessings
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Date: 7/31/2012 1:57:00 PM
Wow, the power of this illustrious write is so immense! You have written a wishful desire, a heartfelt cheer that roams across the window sill! You wrote a diamond amongst so many dusty trails! What a beautiful poem my friend! Great work!!
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Date: 7/31/2012 1:19:00 PM
Nette ------ my dream.....for you :)hugggs
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Date: 7/31/2012 1:11:00 PM
Good poem hoping for the best goodluck
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Date: 7/31/2012 12:12:00 PM
This form is somewhat similar to the Malaysian form - the pantoum. Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/31/2012 9:45:00 AM
lovely write Nette....thanks for stopping by ...and best wishes in the contest....always...Joseph
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Date: 7/31/2012 9:21:00 AM
Interesting work..You made it work so well..Enjoyed reading this morn..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara
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Date: 7/31/2012 6:38:00 AM
Another beautiful work nette all the best in the contest xx
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Date: 7/31/2012 5:07:00 AM
Nette, I love the poem and the form is very good, best of luck...David
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Date: 7/31/2012 5:02:00 AM
Feel a bit sadly in this, but beautiful written Nette. - Wish you luck in contest - I have written my dream to...it is comming..... - oxox love always Anne-Lise
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