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What Do You Think

You and I would make a terrific poetic pair Yours all flow free with so much care Some say an Artistic poet I have become Jerk then smooth out and hum along. You to me are like a Robert Frost While I in my imagination am lost Being daring yet avoiding a crash And enjoy humor of Ogden Nash. Will Rogers is last one I longingly like Can you imagine if in front of a mike How impressive he would have been Through the thick with all of the thin. So Andrea Dietrich what do you think? In my poems, help me work out each kink So mine also for long time each endures And some day too will be just like yours.

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Date: 9/13/2014 8:48:00 PM
Awwww, it was so sweet of you to write and post this one, Jim. Who would not like being compared to the likes of Robert Frost? I love the references you made to some of my favorite folks: Ogden Nash and Will Rogers! Your meter is hopping, Jim!! This one goes to Faves.
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James Horn
Date: 9/14/2014 4:38:00 AM
Many more of mine are about to receive, So in me and my poems, you better believe, And also could it possibly be true Eyes behind sunglasses are probably blue. And you have a song written after them and you Called love, love my love is blue. Jim Horn
Date: 9/13/2014 8:29:00 PM
Andrea is truly inspirational James. I have learned so much from her and she is such a great support for people willing to learn and develop as poets:-) hugs jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2014 4:19:00 AM
we sure will Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/13/2014 8:49:00 PM
Thanks for what you wrote to Jim. It has been really nice this past month to get to know you better and I hope you and I will enjoy each other's poems for years to come!

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