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What Do You See

You look in the mirror, Do you like what you see? You try on that new dress You look in the mirror, Do you like what you see? You change your hair color, You look in the mirror, Do you like what you see? You use some new makeup, You look into the mirror, Do you like what you see? You lose 15 pounds, You look in the mirror, Do you like what you see? You lose 35 more pounds, You look in the mirror, Do you like what you see? You lose another 30 pounds, You look in the mirror, Do you like what you see? You try on your new dress, You curl your newly dyed hair, You cover your face in makeup, You look into the mirror, Finally you like what you see, You faint to the floor, You are rushed to the hospital, The paramedics don't like what they see, You put on that hospital gown, You look in the mirror, Do you like what you see?

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Date: 4/6/2016 8:21:00 PM
Hi Natile, Good concept & brilliant write.Nice first post. Welcome to poetry soup.Wish a successful journey ahead..........hugs
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Date: 4/6/2016 7:03:00 PM
Natalie, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/6/2016 1:53:00 PM
- A great first poem, Natalie :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup .... have fun :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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