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What Do You See

What do you see? The world is in my eyes Tears are in my cries The truth is in my lies Success in all tries The limit in my skies Even salt is on my fries So when you look in my eyes Sincere without lies To answer the question when arise What do you see?

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Date: 1/11/2012 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "Show Me" contest Darian. Love, Carol
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Darian Brown
Date: 1/13/2012 6:21:00 AM
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Date: 1/10/2012 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Darian
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Darian Brown
Date: 1/13/2012 6:21:00 AM
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Date: 1/10/2012 9:56:00 PM
THis was a fun read. I found that funny, even salt is on my fries! Congrats on your win.
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Darian Brown
Date: 1/13/2012 6:21:00 AM
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Date: 1/10/2012 7:02:00 PM
CONGRATS DARIAN ON A DYNAMIC THIRD PLACE WIN..
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Darian Brown
Date: 1/13/2012 6:21:00 AM
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Date: 1/10/2012 6:32:00 PM
A one rhyme poem. Very clever. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Darian Brown
Date: 1/13/2012 6:21:00 AM
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Date: 12/26/2011 5:58:00 PM
Another lovely poem to have read today. Keep up the great work!! Always, Laura
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Date: 1/13/2012 6:22:00 AM
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