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What Child Is This

Tell me something You don’t know And I’ll tell you something You never will. Not in this moment And you will know love As words on a page And you will know life As the lines on your mother’s forehead And you will become What was shrouded in mist The silver white remembrance of a dream And the scar worn on your shoulder blade Will be from your words turning against you Ruination in blind trust But you will grow And you will learn You will look back at the mountains beneath you And you won’t regret climbing higher Cause its where I became you And you became me. And we became one. And the questions you will ask Still won’t be answered What child is this? What child are we? What child am I? Simply me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/21/2017 9:42:00 AM
Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. Also I want to say this is a moving piece, I’m glad I stopped by.
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Iris Blade
Date: 12/21/2017 5:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Richard! Glad you stopped to read Merry Christmas to you, too.
Date: 10/25/2017 5:26:00 PM
Beautiful pen, Iris - congrats on your win!
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Iris Blade
Date: 10/25/2017 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so much! Have a nice day.
Date: 10/18/2017 6:35:00 PM
Nicely done, congratulations on your win!
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Iris Blade
Date: 10/19/2017 7:51:00 AM
Thank you! I enjoyed writing this one.
Date: 10/18/2017 3:23:00 PM
Hi Iris, You penned a good poem for the contest. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Iris Blade
Date: 10/18/2017 3:29:00 PM
Yes I did, and thank you so much. Have a nice day!
Date: 10/18/2017 12:17:00 PM
Grats Iris!!! Well deserved win :)
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Iris Blade
Date: 10/18/2017 3:29:00 PM
Thank you so much! It was my first one. And you as well!
Date: 10/17/2017 5:19:00 AM
Great write Iris, we write for the same contest.... I understand your words, and I wish you good luck in the contest.
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Iris Blade
Date: 10/17/2017 8:55:00 AM
Yes we do, and I love your submission as well. Thank you and good luck to you too!
Date: 10/16/2017 2:07:00 PM
Wonderful :) xomo
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Iris Blade
Date: 10/16/2017 2:25:00 PM
Thank you so much! Have a nice day.

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