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What Catches the Eye

What first catches my eye Is a word…or a phrase That exerts a pull realized Upon entering a maze An air of adventure That’s what it’s about Where will this word lead you Where will it come out? The word is but a poem’s foundation It’s only the start The essential beginning Yet only a part As in a colorful flower The single essence (the aforementioned word) That as nectar is added Draws into it’s presence Fill out and embellish The complement of bees (lil’ pollen thieves) the blooming poem flower As leaves do the trees Until the word has taken A life of it’s own Become more than a word And much more like a poem It’s taken a little imagination, It’s taken a little effort (and maybe an hour) To turn a little word into a thing of fascination This poem I’ve created? I think I shall call it …”Flower”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/27/2013 11:29:00 PM
Very imaginative...I like it
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Date: 12/14/2013 8:25:00 PM
David very creative work
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Date: 12/12/2013 5:29:00 PM
Deep poem right there.
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