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What Beholds

I prayed for you now what to do i lay my eyes and rest my mind i count the sheep remembering the days I've lived those sails have shipped move on to whats better he opened my message to heal a soul gods not to question days have moved on now gods what i question to die alone or to be told by myself I'm scared at home no place to run no where to go when i die what beholds I'm scared as hell truth be told

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Nicholas Garcia

Date: 5/16/2015 4:42:00 PM

Hey thanks everybody I'll be sure to check out yalls stuff as well as others. Keep posted cause there's more to come (:

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2015 7:23:00 PM

Nicholas, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 5/14/2015 6:36:00 PM

Nicholas, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT