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What are You trying to do

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What are You trying to do

Lord
Why do I feel this way?
Like I am waiting
For something
From you
What is it Lord?
I feel so dragged out
So immovable
I don’t know what that is
But You’ve got to do something
I can’t stand it God
What are You trying to do 
To me?

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  1. Date: 4/7/2013 7:04:00 PM
    wow.. This is different, i kind of feel raged with God at the moment, after my grandsons passing... I wish I knew what he was trying to do... always~ LINDA

    Harrell Avatar Toquyen Harrell
    Date: 4/7/2013 7:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, He will help us understand, Linda. Love ya, Toquyen
  1. Date: 4/7/2013 2:09:00 PM
    Toquyen stay with the faith, that is the test...david

    Harrell Avatar Toquyen Harrell
    Date: 4/7/2013 2:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, David! Yes. Love ya, Toquyen