What Am I

Frothing, Churning The liquid inside me Tries to Escape I stay closed And toss about My Load all the more. The weight of the Load Made of sodden fabrics Is nothing compared To my Strength I toss about mercilessly Soaking, Tumbling, I am undefeated. What Am I?

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/16/2014 5:43:00 AM

Congratulations on the fine win. Wonderfully penned poem on Who Am I , mary

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/15/2014 9:06:00 PM

washing machine Mary congrats on win hugs

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2014 2:15:00 PM

Mary, Congratulations, in the "What AM I" contest... love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2014 1:13:00 PM

Mary , CONGRATULATIONS!! Sending you a big hug, I had so much fun reading every entry. I have a blog "What did you say about me???" Hopefully, you stop by when you have time, and reveal the answer. Tell US here or on my blog. WAHT! WHAT! And WHO YOU ARE? Always and Forever ~LINDA

Paul Callus

Date: 3/9/2014 5:25:00 AM

Must be a washing machine...defeat lie in technical fault :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/9/2014 4:47:00 AM

Very cleverly written. Jan x