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What Am I

I'm squirming in my chair of oak with narrow arms, and folks lined up in two long rows of growing thirst and hunger for a breath of air Like sardines in a can of worms we are strange, unlikely shipmates torn between one salesman's limped plea -- the other shark who disagrees Gray flannel suit, the stiff white shirt with slicked down hair, accusing words persuading few with his hot air The black suit spews his declaration a quite contrary explanation Until my mind is torn in two and in a room we must decide Confined inside, a dozen votes where six say yay, six more say nope We're hanging by a thread for days and rumor spreads, with dreadful words He has finally coped with deadlocked folks But sternly looks a bit provoked We sit there like a row of stones of wounded souls. We are excused! We grope for keys, and leave our thrones And as I'm walking out the door No longer needed any more I see the face of one accused Then count the blessings in my life and take a breath of freedom's air So glad to know some welcome arms are waiting there, at home _____________________________________________ "Person"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/16/2014 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Wonderfully penned poem on Who Am I , carrie
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Date: 3/15/2014 9:36:00 PM
in court Carrie congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/18/2013 8:49:00 PM
CARRIE, Congratulations on your well deserved winning poem.. Hail Yeah! to all the dragon slayer winners :-) :-) :-) *LINDA
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Date: 5/17/2013 1:59:00 PM
Congrats once again.. BG
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Date: 5/17/2013 10:03:00 AM
great write ...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/16/2013 8:59:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest
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Date: 5/16/2013 12:35:00 PM
THIS POEM WAS BRILLIANT AND AT THE SAME TIME EDUCATIONAL FOR ME. WE DON'T HAVE A COMPULSORY JURY SYSTEM IN OUR COUNTRY.. S/AFRICA, SO IT GAVE ME A GLIMPSE INTO THE REALITY OF THE WHOLE SCENARIO.
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Date: 5/13/2013 4:49:00 PM
Carrie, wonderful write for the contest, you are an amazing writer, best of luck but I am this is a winner and thanks for visiting my poems, constance
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Date: 5/11/2013 8:56:00 PM
WOW!That's a really cool write Carrie. I truly loved how you penned this. A Talented write indeed. Love the last stanza : ) Bless you for stopping by Beccas blog to wish me a Happy Birthday it meant so much to me. Have a blessed Happy mothers day
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Date: 5/11/2013 6:19:00 PM
you've captured jury duty perfectly! i very much enjoyed your poem...
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