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What a Token Can Be Rewrite

I hear the song of Magic Sleep On Soundscapes during the night The days now are so quiet Neighbors next door vaccinated with children Have short parties and cookies and juice But then cars disappear and sounds suddenly are reduced And as silence returns I ponder When and where can I retrieve What I was and now can be No more driving — careful of seizures And medicines which make it harder to see At this time of life where can I Leave my mark and where can my Token of an existing life truly be Yes I take care of my pets A crow and squirrel and I Meet for breakfast regularly Perhaps after the next shot of vaccine I can return with food and puppy treats For pets and veterans' lunch pleasant and serene But pain is always there so I seek help and heat And on evening Wednesdays I will listen to the hum Of meditation with others and the Teacher's welcome And so my token of life may be A badge of acceptance in a small slice of life But not diminished to any great degree Elements of change a union of soul and body A living token of the great branching tree The tree of life both active then still As all living things will be.

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Date: 4/10/2021 6:20:00 AM
These are particularly difficult days. We are often not aware of what others are dealing with. Blessings and hugs to you Linda.
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Date: 4/9/2021 11:26:00 AM
You wear a badge of courage, Linda. Your longing for a full life runs deeply through each line like a living token. This is a very inspirational piece. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings.
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Date: 4/8/2021 7:08:00 PM
Dearest Linda, I can tell from your poem that you are braving this life and succeeding. Thank you for penning such a heart felt poem, full of humanity and courage. Congrats on your win, thank you for joining. :)
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Date: 4/8/2021 1:34:00 PM
Well penned Linda, with nice imagery and insightful thought. I hope things improve for you soon, take care, blessings, Gordon
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Date: 4/7/2021 12:13:00 AM
My heart aches for you with so much troubles but I love your optimistic attitude. Be strong, be safe. We all have our troubles. I've been suffering since the beginning of the month.
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Linda Milgate
Date: 4/7/2021 10:06:00 PM
I am sorry just reading this now I hope you are feelig better? If weather warms sometimes that helps and when it's cold and damp its worse. Please take care As always enjoy you poetry. I think some of my poetry is a refection of human troubles not the typical honey and butterflies poems although they can be lovely.

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