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What a Strange Feeling

He had never knew this feeling before Which penetrated his pride crust to heart's core Her sight rose a storm which couldn't be uttered Though his tongue was tied,but his eyes stuttered Psyche was imploring running time to stop As with her,he felt as if being at a cloud's top Eons with her would be seconds ending imminently wishing to be with her in a life of vibrant eternity And if she left, he would feel sad and weak Destroyed as falling to the abyss from the peak Thinking of her made him forget slumber As he was lured and locked in love's chamber A. Badr

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Date: 11/19/2015 9:07:00 PM
good one
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Date: 9/26/2015 8:58:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem. Thank you.
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Date: 9/26/2015 8:30:00 AM
I believe your poem is beautiful. I love the flow and the rhyme. Great job ... CayCay
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Ahmed Badr
Date: 9/26/2015 12:28:00 PM
thanks CayCay

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