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What a Feeling

take me,take me in the morning when the wind blows in the treetops and the sun shines through my window throwing shadows on the ceiling and it's just the kind of day that makes me want to say- oh what a feeling! wake me,wake me without a warning when the sky weeps silver teardrops and the sunlight bending rainbows,beautiful rainbows over the meadow now I've lost the will to flee the ways of errancy- oh what a feeling! so don't let me sleep in,just give me a shout out you know it's the weekend and time's on the move I want to be deep in,the life all around me- here and there,everywhere it's such a groove! shake me,shake me when day is dawning and the moon goes back into hiding and the sweet sound,of a bluebird new arriving,here to greet me I'v never seen a brighter day in any kind of way oh what a feeling!

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Date: 4/3/2010 11:29:00 AM
Lovely words
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