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What a Day

One of the best days of my life That still stays with me Is a funny day with my Best friend at the beach Enjoying the sun talking ang laughing Playing in the water kicking and splashing Then along came the seagulls Who were hungry indeed I learned one important lesson Don't have lunch on the beach They thought we were feeding them But we were trying to feed ourselves I remember this day so clearly If I don't remember anything else There were so many seagulls And then more started coming Don't ask me why but we took off running As the seagulls started to follow us We split up and oh my dear My friend was still running holding The sandwich up in the air I laughed as I yelled drop it just drop it As she let the sandwich go The seagulls quickly swapped it We laughed until it hurted Stomach aching tear and all But we learned to have lunch At the picnic table Not on the beach for sure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/31/2010 11:43:00 AM
Got a chuckle. You learned a lesson I guess. Those seagulls can be nasty.
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Date: 3/26/2010 6:56:00 PM
funny, I saw some kids do this one day at the beach and I laughed snot out my nose. any time I see abunch of birds I think of alfred hitchcock.
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Date: 3/25/2010 4:30:00 PM
If for the contest should do well with this exciting write that got my attention and held it. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/25/2010 1:11:00 PM
nice story. john
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Date: 3/25/2010 12:56:00 PM
All I had to see was the word "beach" and u got me Faleshia.. I am such a beach baby its not funny.. was just down last weekend it was so lovely here in New Jersey... enjoyed your creative write tonight..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/25/2010 11:15:00 AM
Agood day and good lesson learnt, great read Daniel and thanks for your support
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Date: 3/25/2010 9:25:00 AM
tHAT SOUNDS LIKE A FUN DAY TO ME. eNJOYED
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Date: 3/25/2010 9:00:00 AM
Faleshia - What a lovely picture you paint with these words - Sometimes the most simple things in life bring us such immense pleasure - You have described such a beautiful fun filled day at the beach - Thankyou for sharing your memories with us - Appreciated -:)
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