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< beneath swollen ..... moon in pasture of...... rolling hills standing ....hind quarters a beautiful black ...... stallion simply took my breath ........ away Entry For Rick Parise's A Memory Of Beauty Tanka Contest G.L. All

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Date: 3/26/2011 10:36:00 PM
congratulations getting through round one with this wonderful tanka. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/9/2011 3:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Katherine. Love Carol
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:59:00 PM
Congrats Katherine on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv...
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Katherine. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2011 6:22:00 PM
If this tanka won for you in the contest, then congratulations! It is well written and pervasively descriptive. There's usually not much anyone can do with so few words and syllables, but you performed admirably with this one.
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Date: 1/10/2011 12:22:00 PM
Creative style. Congratulations on having your poem featured my friend. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/9/2011 8:22:00 PM
and you served this memory of beauty well. best of luck to you and congratulations on being featured this week! --Madison
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Date: 1/9/2011 6:49:00 PM
Congrats Katherine on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv.. H.N.Y..luv..
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Date: 9/14/2010 8:30:00 AM
and this made me smile, Katherine, just picturing that beautiful black stallion-- must be breathtaking indeed -- congrats on your win -- nikko :)
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Date: 9/1/2010 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your third place win!
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Date: 8/30/2010 6:18:00 PM
Ahh, this is such a painting in words!! Nicely done, Katherine! Congratulations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:33:00 PM
Katherine, Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest tanka contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:14:00 PM
Congrats on your third placement, Katherine.
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Date: 8/30/2010 1:16:00 PM
Many congratulations Katherine on your win in Rick's fine contest with this beautiful Tanka. Horses are such magnificent animals >> James
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Date: 8/30/2010 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations Katherine on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 8:21:00 PM
Yes, Horses ae beautiful ceatures. congratulatios. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/29/2010 7:22:00 PM
ps oh, and congratulations!!
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Date: 8/29/2010 7:21:00 PM
I take it you are a horse lover, And your tanka is also a thing of beauty. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/29/2010 6:37:00 PM
Katherine, congratulations on your win in Rick's Tanka contest :)
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Date: 8/29/2010 6:36:00 PM
Congrats Katherine on your big win in Rick's Tanka contest.. awesome as usual.. enjoy my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/27/2010 4:47:00 AM
A beautiful entry for Rick's contest Katherine, all the best to you ~ Wilma
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Date: 8/26/2010 11:08:00 PM
a wonderful poem , enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 8/26/2010 11:19:00 AM
yes! wonderful image, Katherine! good work! jimbo
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Date: 8/26/2010 8:41:00 AM
My favorite horse.. a stallion which I also wrote a poem called Stallion for a contest which wad on soup and it won third.. they are a brilliant beautiful animal and your Tanka has enriched this lovely creation Katherine.. good luck in the contest... am airborne now so be cool my friend..luv..
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Date: 8/26/2010 7:40:00 AM
Oh, seeing that stallion would take my breath away too, Katherine. A lovely image. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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