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Whack and Wallop

Wham! That music is dainty. But the bass drum gives it a kick. Such tympanic contrast. A tasteful tune with a rap, such a whack, such a wallop. Memory can tease, torture, create that tasteful tune while dredging up a thought of something better not called back, to avoid such a whack, such a wallop. (29 Dec 2023)

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Date: 1/4/2024 4:08:00 AM
Whoa!! I wonder if you have got that tune stuck in your head. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Andrew John
Date: 1/4/2024 4:11:00 AM
It can give you a helluva wallop, Sara. Thanks for your comment.
Date: 12/29/2023 5:43:00 PM
Andrew your poem is a musical composition of contrasts and nostalgia, merging delicate melodies with the resonating power of a bass drum. The vivid imagery teases memories, delicately weaving between the tasteful tunes of the past and the cautionary avoidance of reliving certain moments. Your poem is a masterful blend of rhythm, reflection, and lyrical finesse, showcasing exceptional talent for capturing the complexities of life within a few verses.Happy New Year, Andrew! - Blessings, Daniel!
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Date: 12/30/2023 1:56:00 AM
Thanks very much, Daniel.
Date: 12/29/2023 3:41:00 PM
well done, Andrew...you're right, sometimes memory teases and tortures. Happy New Year, Sara
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Date: 12/30/2023 1:56:00 AM
Thanks very much, Sara.
Date: 12/29/2023 6:34:00 AM
Nicely done Andrew..
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Andrew John
Date: 12/30/2023 1:56:00 AM
Thanks very much, Silent.

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