We'Ve Kissed Her Rain

Glens through our Highlands Her melt, her cries, in tears, She Scot's, have kissed her rains .

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/19/2014 9:37:00 AM

your second line wow!!! i enjoyed this haiku!! :)

James Fraser
Date: 7/19/2014 1:45:00 PM

So glad you liked this short piece Olive, and thank you so much for your always lovely comments, James :)x

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/19/2014 2:35:00 AM

Beautiful . Scots gave their brave heart and soul indeed.I read Scotland's history and yes these words you've written justifies it so well.

James Fraser
Date: 7/19/2014 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Charmaine, I always look forward to your comments, James :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2014 6:27:00 PM

Great haiku James - I've not experienced Scottish rain for many years so its high time i went back there! Hugs jan xxx

James Fraser
Date: 7/19/2014 12:46:00 PM

Yep, you'll need to come back as we've plenty of it and you're sure not to be disappointed, James :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2014 6:09:00 PM

The Scots are lucky to have kissed her rains! Enjoyed your haiku, James.

James Fraser
Date: 7/18/2014 6:12:00 PM

It appears that I'm the 'Rain Man' of Inverness, as when I venture out it always rains. Recognition at last, apart being a Genius, ha ha! smiles, James ;)