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Wet Enjoyed By Frogs

Roosters crow across the swift creek Their sound weighted by the fog Magnolia blossoms coated damp The wet enjoyed by frogs The pear tree's heavy crop snaps limbs With its fruit immature Lovely, lucious pears destroyed too soon Weight the tree can't endure Life can weight us down with heavy loads Physical stress from work Emotional pain from life's downs Some would soon life shirk Let the tree carry all your loads Release the weighted pain Jesus our burdens willingly bears No need to let life drain Finis'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/13/2014 6:09:00 AM
I love this, "Life can weight us down with heavy loads" "Jesus our burdens willingly bears". It's like quoting the bible, your writing and choice of words is amazing. Thank you
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Date: 8/11/2014 12:05:00 PM
Oh I love this Sara and can so relate to the final stanza. Do let me know when it is finished:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 8/11/2014 11:33:00 AM
enticingly charming, sara... would like to see how this will end.. huggs
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Date: 8/11/2014 11:08:00 AM
Wonderful imagery n such a Lovely write Sara! Hv a blessed day!
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