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Wet

Cold, dark rain drops are falling on my back, As I continue to fall on your front, Receiving the benefits of the hunt, Under a sky that is completely black. On a bed of grass, we pile in a stack. Caught in the moment, we perform this stunt, Giving and getting an object so blunt. Feeling the rhythm, we remain on track. With satisfaction, I make my last call, Relieving your back of the grass of blades. Satisfied, we walk away from it all, Leaving behind the love that we just laid. On the ground, the rain continues to fall, Washing away the love that we just made.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/12/2010 7:01:00 PM
woe! you got recomended by my lady. I'm a dude this is not what I want to read. Kool stuff! J.C.
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Date: 7/8/2010 1:47:00 PM
wow,, so this was pretty intense he he,, enjoyed..P.D.
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Date: 6/26/2010 8:17:00 AM
I had to hit you hard with that one lololol and your comments are so rude Doc ha ha ha ha ..you started this i just have to beat you at it lololololol ....!!!! which num are we on so far i have lost count ha ha ha ha sarah x
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Date: 6/25/2010 6:30:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Dakarai. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2010 2:02:00 AM
HERE GOES MY TURN ...
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Date: 6/24/2010 3:39:00 PM
oh Doc my sonnet man ...This is the best !!! love we just laid !!! oh i will do my in morning now i am having to really think ....YEP YOU GOT ME BACK LOLOL SARAH X
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Date: 6/24/2010 3:37:00 PM
sounds wild...
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Date: 6/24/2010 2:54:00 PM
Doc have you read my latest, poem,,Suicide stop,,hope you go read it,,,i really would love your opinion,..later,..p.d.
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Date: 6/24/2010 2:48:00 PM
your added again Doc., i started to read your poem, and it had such an innocent beginning.. and than bammm ..lol..your ending is so far out there,,,loved it ,..your buddy girl #1 p.d.
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