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snowflakes kiss our cheeks winter blanket keeps us warm hearts melt together 03~01~15 Get Romantic – Andrea Dietrich Visual Seven Traditional Haiku 5,7,5 Checked with How Many Syllables ~awarded 4th place~

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Harpreet Kaur

Date: 3/15/2015 7:49:00 AM

Great job!!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2015 8:30:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Harpreet:-) Hugs jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/11/2015 9:54:00 PM

Congratulations on a romantic haiku. Very good imagery here.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2015 5:22:00 AM

Thanks so much Reason:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2015 5:33:00 PM

Grats on your win! finally I'm getting around to read these romantic writes again. :) Hugs, stay warm :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2015 5:34:00 PM

There are too many contests judged and too many poems to read - don't get time to write lol! Hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/9/2015 1:10:00 AM

A sweet poem and win, Jan...back with my congrats...hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2015 9:58:00 AM

Thanks Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 3/8/2015 6:17:00 PM

JAN, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 6:21:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 12:08:00 PM

Anytime Jan... :) :) :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 12:11:00 PM

:-) xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 11:55:00 AM

Hello Jan, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 12:06:00 PM

Thanks Linda:-) Hugs jan xx

Hija De La Luna

Date: 3/7/2015 8:36:00 PM

Jan, I had that feeling when I saw the image! Beautiful write! congratulations! Hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 6:01:00 AM

Many thanks Hija:-) hugs Jan xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/7/2015 7:11:00 PM

portrays the art perfectly. Congrad's on your win. Light & love

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 7:12:00 PM

Thanks so much Debbie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/7/2015 4:06:00 PM

Pleased to be back with congratulations, Jan...very merited!! hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 4:10:00 PM

Thanks Paul it was a great challenge Andrea set for us:-) Hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/7/2015 1:01:00 PM

Congratulations Jan, I felt the crunch of the snow

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 1:11:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/7/2015 11:10:00 AM

another lovely haiku from you, you always do these short forms justice; I love the witty word play in the title - congrats on your win! hugs, charlotte

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 11:12:00 AM

Thank you so much Charlotte - your wonderful words spur me on to try even harder with my writing - and I do try and have fun with the titles too:-) Hugs Jan xxx

John Lawless

Date: 3/7/2015 7:16:00 AM

Jan, you had me at "Snow in Love". Great title and wonderful haiku. The contradictions in lines 2 and 3 are synapse teasers.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 8:49:00 AM

Thanks so much John for your lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 3/7/2015 6:35:00 AM

Congrats on a great win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 8:48:00 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/7/2015 5:51:00 AM

Love Jan...Congrats

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 8:48:00 AM

Thanks Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/7/2015 2:04:00 AM

Any room under that blanket for me? Answer soon- I might get cold feet :) Congrats, Jan. Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 4:38:00 AM

Ha ha ha Mr Viv ... I always have cold feet:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/7/2015 12:45:00 AM

Congrats Jan! hugs! :D

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 4:37:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2015 11:40:00 PM

Jan, of all the snow poems, yours is the most delightful. Loved the cute title you gave this one and that final line. That is what melted my heart. Congrats for a great win in my contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 4:37:00 AM

Thanks for the 4th place - will get round to reading the winners later:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 3/4/2015 12:36:00 PM

Your words have warmed this image Jan. Good luck in Andrea's contest, hugs, James xx

James Fraser
Date: 3/4/2015 1:58:00 PM

It's me on holiday, and I'm not the best at having my photo taken but I smiled on this holiday ;-) xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2015 1:49:00 PM

Thanks so much James ... love the new avatar:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/4/2015 9:53:00 AM

A nice image speaks the alike your beautiful poem. Enjoyed a lot. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2015 9:54:00 AM

Thanks so much BL:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Cona Adams

Date: 3/3/2015 10:19:00 AM

Love it, Jan. Great photo too.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2015 10:25:00 AM

Thanks Cona - Andrea posted 7 images for us to chose - I loved this one - I hope she likes my poem:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rob Carmack

Date: 3/2/2015 8:30:00 PM

Jan, this is very well done, especially considering it is a Haiku. I liked the play on words with the title as well.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2015 2:08:00 AM

Thank you Rob - I too like the title:-) Just hope it meets with Andrea's approval:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2015 1:41:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..I like the imagine..Thanks for stopping by..I changed the poem that you just read..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 3/2/2015 1:43:00 PM

Oh I will drop by - rhymezone sure comes up with some interesting idea lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/2/2015 1:29:00 PM

A delightful image, dear Jan. Summer has it's own "warm blanket" and it cannot be discarded. I just love winter and your haiku! Best wishes in the contest. Love, carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 3/2/2015 1:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Carolyn - I do hope Andrea approves i tried so hard to get this right:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ken Jordan

Date: 3/2/2015 11:32:00 AM

Jan, I'm ready to get cozy by the fire, and snuggle the night away - great Haiku! Ken

Jan Allison
Date: 3/2/2015 11:36:00 AM

Thanks so much Ken for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx