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Well, Well, Well

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Well, Well, Well

Some subtle Trouble in Minds so muddled-
With one small thought, reduced to rubble
This Agony will more than double
When the Truth "pops" me like a bubble...

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  1. Date: 10/24/2013 6:41:00 PM
    chan this is unique and interesting. Gets the reader thinking. But don't pop like a bubble. Then I'll have one less friend. LOL hugs

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    Date: 10/24/2013 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, hon. I am Jekyll and Hyde (but it just depends on my mood lol).
    davis Avatar robin davis
    Date: 10/24/2013 6:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the comment on my Love Fireworks poem. AAAWWW No one should be jealous of you. Your too honest and sweet. Unless you have a hidden evil side. LOL
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 5:19:00 PM
    I enjoyed that clever write, thanks for sharing....peter

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 8/29/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A thousand thanks for the kind words, Peter; I appreciate you stopping by :)