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Some subtle Trouble in Minds so muddled- With one small thought, reduced to rubble This Agony will more than double When the Truth "pops" me like a bubble...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/24/2013 6:41:00 PM
chan this is unique and interesting. Gets the reader thinking. But don't pop like a bubble. Then I'll have one less friend. LOL hugs
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/24/2013 9:17:00 PM
Thanks, hon. I am Jekyll and Hyde (but it just depends on my mood lol).
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Robin Davis
Date: 10/24/2013 6:43:00 PM
Thanks for the comment on my Love Fireworks poem. AAAWWW No one should be jealous of you. Your too honest and sweet. Unless you have a hidden evil side. LOL

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