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clouds like sheep grazing in the blue scatter on the breeze How marvelous was the first week of March in my state. The temperatures exceeded my hopeful expectations. If the old proverb is true, perhaps this month will go out with a lion’s roar, for I’m pretty sure it came in with the bleat of a lamb! Daylight Saving time also has arrived along with St. Patrick’s Day and the wearing of the green, and Easter and our Mother’s Day will follow. The day I most look forward to, however, is that day which turns my front yard into a bright fiesta. Right around the end of week one or two of April, my ornamental pear and plum trees always undergo their annual transformation. pear tree’s white petals pearlescent in the sun . . . plum tree’s blush Yes, each April it never fails to amaze me: nature’s orderly sequence of events which so beautifully welcome spring’s warmth. Birds whose nests are so well-hidden in each tree’s branches will decorate my yard with their flashes of color as they soar to the sky and then flit among the leaves of their new-found home. I enjoy catching glimpses of the swallows’ shiny dark wings and the red of the robin and of the occasional cardinal. Even more special are sudden glimpses of bluebirds and hummingbirds that I rarely get to see! These sightings so excite me! lion or lamb - spring turns me into an April fool March 21, 2021 for the Springtime Haibun Contest Poetry Contest of M. L. Kiser Now for Brian Strand's 'ALL YOURS (Apr 12)' Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/19/2021 9:09:00 PM
Yay!!! Top spot on the Best New Poems List Andrea. Congratulations on your win as well. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/19/2021 10:19:00 AM
Big congrats for landing at the top of the Best New Poem list, my friend. Your love for spring is evident and your imagery is poetic and beautiful. Thank you for sharing your anticipation and joy of arrival for this wonderful season! A fave ~ John
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Date: 4/19/2021 7:13:00 AM
Reading this winner was delightful. Congrats on your spring theme being in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 4/18/2021 3:18:00 AM
This is simply spectacular Andrea! This is a fave for me! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/14/2021 7:34:00 PM
I love the imagery Andrea. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/13/2021 1:37:00 AM
So Beautiful Andrea....much love..Take care :)
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Date: 4/12/2021 6:44:00 PM
Your words continue to flow just like the spring season you have so aptly portrayed! Beautiful, fresh and exciting with promise. Lonna
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Date: 4/12/2021 4:15:00 PM
Back with another congratulations on your win in All Yours with this exquisite set of Haibuns. Happy spring!
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Date: 4/12/2021 2:17:00 PM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Andrea. GREAT haibun! Janice
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Date: 4/5/2021 6:38:00 PM
Lovely sets of Haibun! Congratulations on your win.. More to come!
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Date: 3/23/2021 5:22:00 PM
Wow! Andrea, You've penned a well-written Haibun expresses why I love “ Spring “ so much. It is filled with everything the season is all about. Congrats in advance. Excellent job, my friend:-) Alexis
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/23/2021 5:36:00 PM
thanks so much, Alexis but never congratulate me early. It can be a jinx. One never knows in these contests. Luv ya!
Date: 3/23/2021 12:41:00 PM
This was beautiful, Andrea. I don't see Haibun on this site very often, so this was a treat. Enjoyed the first and last haiku best... the cloud sheep grazing in the blue .... all the way up to the April Fool! Hope it does well in the contest, but either way, a pleasure to read.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/23/2021 5:37:00 PM
I really enjoyed doing the haiku part too, Timothy. Yes, we do not see haibun all that much here. I really like them.
Date: 3/23/2021 2:45:00 AM
Andrea I just loved the opening lines... "Clouds like sheep, grazing in the blue...."." Pear trees white petals... pearlescent in the sun, plum trees blush"... I enjoyed reading your descriptions of springtime... I have never written a Haibun.. Awesome... Faving this... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/23/2021 5:37:00 PM
You are so sweet to appreciate those lines, Anitha.
Date: 3/22/2021 8:56:00 PM
A brilliantly written haibun, Andrea:)
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Date: 3/22/2021 4:51:00 PM
Wow! A combination of three descriptions in prose and poetry! Brilliant halibun ~ Mala
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Date: 3/22/2021 3:07:00 PM
My favorite time of year and you simply aced it dear friend, winning wishes on the wings of hope xo
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Date: 3/22/2021 11:00:00 AM
March is rainy and windy and cold. I hope April comes with better weather. Loved your senryus.
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Date: 3/22/2021 9:37:00 AM
Another brilliant write with wondrous images Andrea. :) Linda
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Date: 3/22/2021 6:32:00 AM
You sprang into Spring beautifully Andrea, best wishes
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Date: 3/22/2021 5:39:00 AM
Your longing for spring resonates in this poem, Andrea. Wonderful images.
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Date: 3/22/2021 1:54:00 AM
This is exquisitely done, Andrea. I have never seen a bluebird, but hummingbirds are prominent here. I am glad you get them both sometimes. Wonderful pen!
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Date: 3/21/2021 5:00:00 PM
Pretty! Love the final ku! Cute!
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Date: 3/21/2021 4:49:00 PM
I loved your novel approach to the Haibun. Very interesting with fine imagery and description. GL in the contest!
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Date: 3/21/2021 4:21:00 PM
That is what many people will say about the Sunshine season; enjoy the good weather. Best wishes for a successful contest, Andrea.
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Date: 3/21/2021 2:13:00 PM
Even in our nation's capitol the cherry blossoms are in bloom. Spring is truly amazing in its beauty. Best wishes for a win in the contest, Andrea! Hugs, Carolyn
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