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Weightless

trying to stay trim lost little boy dragging to the gym going on a limb can’t find the joy? make your song a hymn before your days get dark and grim lift that weight praising Him
---------- A Tercou: 5a:4b:5a 5a:4b:5a 8a:6a

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Date: 3/9/2023 3:16:00 AM
Lift the weight praising Him. Then everything will seem weightless. Good one Jeff !
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Date: 3/8/2023 6:54:00 AM
efficient in its depth and deep in its efficiency... nice!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/8/2023 1:24:00 PM
thanks, Roberto - I keep trying out all these forms, and some, I really like - this is one of those I may come back to!

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