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Weight rested against my ribs with a whirlwind of shame entangling my hair, swaying scarce vegetation, and caressing the matted fur of dead rodents. Fenced into a concrete playground of abandoned buildings and broken glass. Noxious gas emitting from unknown, untended, brass pipes are not as intoxicating as the sun filtering through the cracks. Left to my own devices, my legs have went from four to two - standing. No longer mindless, but well aware of my eagerness to escape. To trudge through back-allies to the end of damage done, and run across pavement from sidewalk to sidewalk. To find the place that has been untouched from the beginning, and skip into its fields with glass stuck in my heels.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/28/2016 12:06:00 PM
Amber Fua, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 1/4/2012 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Amber. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2011 2:26:00 PM
Thank you all. It was surprising to see that I was a first rounder for one of the international poetry contests. I never really intended for the poem to actually be read by anyone, so it's refreshing to hear such positive praise from fellow poets.
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Date: 12/27/2011 10:01:00 AM
You have certainly accomplished a feat of artistic virtuosity with this account of an alley encounter, suggesting through your use of language nuances of attitude and emotional turmoil. Very good work.
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Date: 12/27/2011 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Amber. I wish you the best on your writing endeavors in the new year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/26/2011 5:45:00 PM
Very moving poem.
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Date: 5/3/2011 4:27:00 AM
Hello Amber profound poem here. Looking foreward to reading more of your work. Anne
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Date: 5/3/2011 4:11:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amber. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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