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Weeping Willow - Tanka - Your Welca

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hey there willow bank admire your hanging eyes mine are far from dry withdraw tears another time now...i’ll cry you a river 10/01/2014

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/5/2014 11:51:00 PM

I like the play on words!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/3/2014 3:50:00 PM

Excellent!I am favouring this beauty.Tanka journal and haiku journal has open submissions at the moment ,maybe you wish to.give it a try.Its awesome

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/3/2014 4:46:00 AM

A river of a poetry my friend! Marvelously done, my friend Maurice!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/3/2014 3:43:00 AM

Another fine write from you Maurice. The weeping willow branches have tanned my hide many times during youth and I think the are perfectly named because of it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2014 11:22:00 PM

Wow, a great tanka too. You are showing us there is nothing you cannot do. Love that last line!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/2/2014 10:37:00 PM

Brilliant, what a beautiful photo, and what a fantastic and amazing poem. So much said in this verse! I sent you a soup mail awhile back, did you get it?

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/2/2014 12:49:00 PM

oh my, this is outstanding and definitely a vivid write that enchants, Maurice... huggs

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/2/2014 12:42:00 PM

How many rivers have I cried?..lol. I fell in love with your "hanging eyes"... BG

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/2/2014 10:46:00 AM

Wow another great one Maurice! Love the last line that I too s'times do!

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/3/2014 1:55:00 PM

thank you Dr. Sharma.

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/2/2014 9:09:00 AM

Touching write Maurice..Good job!

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/3/2014 1:53:00 PM

thank you Ken.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/2/2014 6:24:00 AM

oh I love this one. I love weeping willows, too.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/3/2014 1:52:00 PM

thank you.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/1/2014 6:53:00 PM

Wonderful piece and picture....cheer up

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/2/2014 4:37:00 AM

I was crying from laughter.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/1/2014 5:47:00 PM

wonderful photo image and fabulous imagery in your poem - happy write next please Maurice I need fun not tears:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/2/2014 5:01:00 AM

Lol

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2014 7:12:00 PM

LOL - I'm crying with laughter at your comment Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/1/2014 7:08:00 PM

What? You don't think this fits in with the other funny writes, you ended with Anticipation, Cas had "It's wet" and "it's sticky" Tim had "it's hard" and "it's soft". Mine is "it's weeping"

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/1/2014 4:54:00 PM

veery cool image & line match. Light & Love

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/1/2014 7:12:00 PM

Thank you, Debbie.

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/1/2014 4:30:00 PM

Wow, I really do love your poem!!! that is awesome! :) hugs

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/2/2014 4:39:00 AM

Thank you Cas., I always appreciate your encouragement.