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Weeping Willow

His whispers are like the wind As he rests his head on me Soft cries of a lover lost His tears are like the seas Wilting with the pain As he falls apart From words left unsaid A lover’s broken heart I wrap my arms around him He drifts off to sleep It isn’t any wonder Why this willow weeps

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/24/2008 11:21:00 AM
I am confused as to who this is about, but you continue to comfort, my friend. This was beautiful, Lena. Love, Ivy
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Date: 7/17/2008 10:16:00 AM
Wow, extremely creative and enchanting. This is a new view of the willow tree for me. Lovely. Regards, Sara:)
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Date: 7/14/2008 8:14:00 AM
Very beautiful poem - great rhyme and flow - many blessings
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Date: 7/14/2008 6:55:00 AM
Weeping Willows are my favorite tree. We have a beauty in our front yard. Excellent use of Personification. Loved this Lena. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/14/2008 6:16:00 AM
Lena, your words pour from the page so fluidly. The gentleness of the tone reflects the caring heart of the speaker within the write. Very well written. Michael
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