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Weeping Walls of Water

the wavering walls of water willfully weep against the weary watchtower... March.29.2016 For Contest In one line...write what you SEE or FEEL By Poet Destroyer A

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/10/2016 10:45:00 AM

What an amazing picture and inspired line.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2016 3:40:00 PM

I really liked seeing this one today!

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/29/2016 6:58:00 PM

Thanks my dear Andrea...for the visit and comment...^WW^

Constance La France

Date: 3/29/2016 2:13:00 PM

Winged, BEAUTIFUL, you captured the essence of the image perfectly ~

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/29/2016 6:57:00 PM

Thank you Wings...I'm finally winning some contests...so don't enter this one lol...^WW^

Tim Smith

Date: 3/29/2016 12:23:00 PM

Wow...what use of alliteration...I feel compassion in your line.

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/29/2016 1:31:00 PM

Thank you Tim...I try to look at as though that everything has a spirit(soul)...we are all living things in this world...^WW^

Tom Quigley

Date: 3/29/2016 11:13:00 AM

Very cool alliteration!

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/29/2016 11:53:00 AM

Thank you my cool friend Tom...^WW^