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Weeping Petals

Sobbing flowers mourn, As cancer plagues the garden: Grub worms at their roots.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/21/2010 12:19:00 PM
Natures attacks herself, nice Haiku Raul >> James
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Date: 4/20/2010 2:53:00 PM
great description raul :) ..i'm glad to find my words back :) ..all thanks to my mentor : the wordsmith ..i've been reading on gs & ps again and thats what inspired me to to continue with what i should be doin :) ..thanks for the comments my friend ..much appreciation . Marco
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Date: 4/19/2010 1:01:00 PM
I see that you got at the root of the problem...Great idea...Good luck....Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Thanks for the placement in the contest..Very difficult occupation deciding who wins with all the well written Haiku ....Sara
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Date: 4/19/2010 10:28:00 AM
Excellent take on the picture Raul. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/18/2010 11:05:00 PM
I love the title Raul,and the mourning of the flowers..Original View..which i enjoyes reading..Charma
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Date: 4/18/2010 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Raul for the much valued honour to my poem in your contest.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/18/2010 1:11:00 AM
Excellent description Raul. Thank you for my placement in your Contest, Can wait to enter your new one!!!
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