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Weep Not For My Many Pains

Weep Not For My Many Pains Weep not for my many desperate pains. Instead demand that I again renew; Our deeper love displaying greatest gains. Weep not for my many desperate pains Forgetting forever the darkest stains Where seasons are miserable and blue. Weep not for my many desperate pains. Instead demand that I again renew. Robert J.Lindley A Triolet Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 Total # Syllables: 80 Total # Lines: 8 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A Total # Words: 50

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Date: 11/14/2017 8:38:00 PM
A beautiful write Robert about not giving up in the face of despair and believing and growing in love. An excellent Triolet and enjoyed!
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Date: 3/7/2015 10:05:00 AM
brilliantly penned Robert - the final line speaks volumes:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/7/2015 1:54:00 AM
I've missed a lot of great poetry from you lately...I hope to catch up. This is a poignant but hopeful triolet...well done! hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/7/2015 1:13:00 AM
Robert I do see a glimmer of hope in this..that is a good thing! And this certainly is a time for renewal...hugs, Deb
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