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Week of Reflection

a week just for me, for myself without reservation, without guile to be what I can't be today to pretend, to love, to smile.... to the ocean, to the origin of life to taste the salt and hear the sound to raise my eyes to the horizon hoping the lost will be found.... l'd read the words of great poets drown in the words and the write messages to make sense of living that make my sore heart take flight.... like time that has run though my glass I'd let the sand run through my fingers A few days of quiet reflection and the aroma of love that lingers....... contest...

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Date: 10/29/2010 3:57:00 PM
Congrats, Barb. Awesome. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 10/29/2010 2:43:00 PM
just looking at your quiet reflection write, a thing i am trying to doing at the moment and just looking here and there for thoughts to uplift. have read with pleasure.
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Date: 10/28/2010 2:40:00 PM
beautiufl, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/28/2010 6:08:00 AM
Barbara, congratulations on your win, it made me feel good inside having read this one again ;) Wilma
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Date: 10/28/2010 12:33:00 AM
Barbara Congrats on notching 1st place in contest.... Luv/Best wishes .....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/27/2010 9:09:00 PM
Many congratulations Barbara for this wonderful win.
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Date: 10/27/2010 5:33:00 PM
Congratulations Barbara with this top quality Quatrain. Well worthy of a top spot win. Enjoy. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/27/2010 2:44:00 PM
barbara I love how you made this one poetic by using metaphor and relating sand and water (drowning in poetry) to the day at the beach Wonderful win! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/27/2010 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Barbara
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Date: 10/27/2010 12:50:00 PM
Congrats BG on your number one win in Carol's contest with this amazing entry luv.. enjoy your top spot with so many wonderful peers today ...
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Date: 10/27/2010 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you Barbara for taking the time to enter my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2010 9:17:00 AM
Thank you => haha I turn 17 in december... lol not that that makes me sooooo much older, but, lol haha => you are a wonderful poet I have been reading your poems!
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Date: 10/23/2010 9:09:00 AM
This Speaks to the heart of many! I only being 16... but I understand this! Great Job! =>
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Date: 10/23/2010 7:37:00 AM
Wonderful nostalgic writing. Good luck in the contest. Thank you so much for my surprising win in your contest. Mom's soup was more hearty and good than I could describe in a few words. love, Joyce
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Date: 10/22/2010 2:34:00 PM
Enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 10/21/2010 12:43:00 AM
enjoyed Barbara, deep and full of feeling is this. Harry
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:15:00 PM
Yes, as C.L said, you are a very reflective person, unilke me. I just am always do do do. But I really enjoyed this. It's lovely imagery as well! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/20/2010 6:27:00 AM
Wow Barbara, I love this, you made me reflect as well. Good luck for the contest. Thank you for the encouragement, it means a lot :) Wilma
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:56:00 PM
This sounds like a winner to me. Good luck in the contest. I really enjoyed it.
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:24:00 PM
nice write for the contest, good luck, Barbara and thanks for your comments on karma
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Date: 10/19/2010 3:27:00 PM
I love the sand running through your fingers....such a peace and tranquil thought...lovely, Barbara!
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Date: 10/19/2010 2:57:00 PM
Very...very nice....touching.
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Date: 10/19/2010 2:26:00 PM
Smile ~ "Extremely Beautiful 'My Dear, Lovely & Precious Barbara Gorelick;' Magical!!!" ~ Hope "Your Treasures" are doing wonderfully &, "A Fave; 'Soft & Beautiful'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day My Dear;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 10/19/2010 12:19:00 PM
nice flowing rythem,matching well with your ocean theme,thank you.
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Date: 10/19/2010 12:10:00 PM
May I join you at the sea, dear LNC? This sounds like a great way to spend a week. A lot of "time has run through my glass as well," Barbara, but there's still some sand left... Love, Carolyn Soup mail
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