Weed

Rolled up smoke drugs Smoke and get haiku Run out buy more smokey drugs time

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Skat A

Date: 1/30/2016 7:51:00 PM

james, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love -- SKAT --

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/22/2014 6:54:00 PM

your form wasn't quite spot on, you can look up forms on the link in the header. I did get a kick outta your line "smoke and get haiku" a play on words, humorous

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/22/2014 6:50:00 AM

James, I've known people who steal to get money for drugs. Their money as well as their dreams seem to go up in smoke. A thought-provoking write. Best wishes, Carolyn

Tracey Lawrence

Date: 8/21/2014 9:29:00 PM

i found that this didn't really flow.... and not to offend you but weed is actually very dangerous if it is not used correctly in my opinion the only people who should smoke it would be the people who need medicalmarijuana.

James Robertson
Date: 8/21/2014 9:42:00 PM

Thanks for your comment, its good to get feedback :)