Wedku

WEDKU Wedlock adored Obeyed and honored. Why are you so confused? Sacred wedlock You stepped together Why are you adjusting? Wedlock keeps you Safe and so secured Is patience-key needed? Nice parenthood Naturally comes Is yet any romance left? Wedlock admits Lifelong Commitment Is it the life sentence? 10/21/15 Premiere Contest No 4 by SKAT A

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Viv Wigley

Date: 10/26/2015 1:10:00 AM

I've been with my good Lady 29 years, Anisha- you'd have thought I'd get time off for good behaviour :). Good write, well done. Viv

Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/6/2015 10:18:00 PM

Thanks Viv Anisha

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 10/25/2015 6:36:00 PM

Congratulations Anisha.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/6/2015 10:19:00 PM

Thanks Nyada

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2015 5:20:00 PM

the last part should not sound so funny, when many times it is so true! I'm laughing all the way to my grave. Good set. Congrats.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/6/2015 10:21:00 PM

Thank you. I appreciate your comments Andrea Love Anisha D

Jan Allison

Date: 10/25/2015 3:27:00 PM

very creative Anisha congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/6/2015 10:22:00 PM

Thanks Jan I always feel happy on your appreciation. Anisha D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/25/2015 1:20:00 PM

Great job, thanks for entering my contest with this fun piece.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/22/2015 8:44:00 AM

I like the premise of this piece. Try to rework it. Four syllables first line five second and six for third line. You have captured the spirit of the form. List it under Questionku form.