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Wedding Veil

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                        gossamer laces

                   adorn the face of young love...

                        the veil of promise
                                   






a traditional haiku 5/7/5

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Haiku From The Heart" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Joseph May

Date: 4/14/2012 6:01:00 AM

congrats on your win Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/13/2012 10:56:00 PM

congrats on another awesome win Carrie..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2012 10:18:00 PM

Carrie, , a wonderful congratulations.. with this awesome poem * good night. :-) always~ PD

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/13/2012 6:47:00 PM

Ahhhh, so sweeet...Congratulations on your win Carrie!! big hugs--love,deb

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2012 5:56:00 PM

Very expressive and creative work..Enjoyed..Congrats on your work..Sara

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/10/2009 8:58:00 AM

Perfection in a Brides Haiku! I love to read you Carrie, thanks for your visit and kind comments also. Hugs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/28/2009 9:16:00 PM

thankxxx Carrie .. so glad u liked my World Series poem... my Yankees lost tonight but we'll get them tomorrow .. I enjoy writing about all subjects.. I totally love the way your placed your words in this haiku .. very savvy collection... so happy to be on the Soup with so many talented poets like u...looking forward to joining more contests too... Linda-Marie

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/27/2009 1:03:00 PM

I like your interpretation of the picture. I like how you humanized the falls. Congratulations on your win!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/24/2009 7:13:00 PM

Dear Carrie, Congratulations on placing in Raul's Contest This Haiku definitely brings the picture to life Extrordinary Talent performed in YOUR Haiku Thank-YOU for YOUR many Gracious Comments Always...HG P.S. I have a computer again YOURS...HG

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/23/2009 4:31:00 AM

Congratulations, Carrie, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines on the Soup. (I thought for sure this haiku would do well when I read it the first time. You did great!!!) Smiles, DAS-J

Sue Mason

Date: 10/19/2009 5:24:00 PM

Beautifully done, Carrie.

Marty Owens

Date: 10/19/2009 9:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. They were all so beautiful...I'm glad I didn't have to judge..Marty

Adell Foster

Date: 10/18/2009 8:35:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win in Raul's contest Carrie, :-) God Bless, Always, Adell

Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/18/2009 8:11:00 PM

I'm so INLOVE with this bride that i've put her in my FAV chamber! OVERWHELMING poetry. It's so perfect in all it's facets. LOVE the topic! FELICITATIONS! Carrie. Wish I had more to say, but i'm speechless.