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Weave of Life's Fabric

Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust Polished now in the hallway, my fond antique Recalling Grandaunt’s delicate craftwork-- Each pattern of fabric threaded with zest, As her hands would bounce around pinpoint needles, Weaving an array of doilies rugs garments Intently absorbed in a foot pedal’s rhythm That her hums trailed beyond Nam’s bombings : The war years seemed like only yesterday, Calming her through spindles of moon’s quick cycle . Along each evening’s gloss, we rollicked laughed Exchanging banters like friends… till she crossed over : Tonight, I gently pat her own quilt laying on my bedside, Lining our decades of sweet remembrances… For a moment, my eyes gazed at stars’ fading wicker, The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark. Viv Wigley’s Contest: One nine and sixteen Written 5/1/2018

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Date: 5/3/2018 1:35:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your great win.
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Date: 5/2/2018 5:59:00 PM
Very heartfelt, dear Nette. The tile is so perfect for what you wrote. Very evocative writing. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Lainie
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Date: 5/2/2018 4:06:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Nette, Wonderful story and tribute to your grandaunt...Charlie
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Date: 5/2/2018 2:42:00 PM
You did a great job with this. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 5/2/2018 11:55:00 AM
Awe...Nette, I also own a blanket my grandmother made , but sealed and put away..Congratulations on your win,
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Date: 5/2/2018 11:47:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in the contest Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2018 9:42:00 AM
Nette this is amazing, a well- written nostalgic tale on the contest. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/2/2018 7:28:00 AM
Wonderful tribute of your Grandaunt!
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Date: 5/2/2018 5:52:00 AM
Congrats on you well deserved win, nette.
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Date: 5/2/2018 2:47:00 AM
Lovely imagery Nette. Congratulations. Tom.
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Date: 5/1/2018 1:22:00 PM
Hi nette A fond remembrance of war, peace and diligence. I wish you well and thank you very much for your sweet comment
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Date: 4/30/2018 8:39:00 PM
Nette dear poet, this write of yours gave me chills, I lived with my grandmother when I was quite the young lad and many things, especially when I pass by antique shops remind me of her and the love she shared with me...ty
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Date: 4/30/2018 4:56:00 PM
Astonishing poetry!Walking me through a time of struggle and fine remembrances makes me shiver with mixed sentiments!
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Date: 4/30/2018 4:56:00 PM
and woven it is, " tonight, I gently pat her own quilt laying on my bedside, lining our decades of sweet remembrances" what a picture...good luck dear poet
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Date: 4/30/2018 4:02:00 PM
Beautifully woven life's fabric..memories of past recalled with fondness..best for a win, nette.
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