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Weathered Sandstone

Yosemite’s marvels glaciers from the last Ice Age sculpted Half Dome and El Capitan alas, though I worship the almighty Hand, I am but sand compressed by elements solidified by desert sun pounded by wind made porous by rain withstanding, I remain sandstone vessel capturing microscopic organisms purifier for aquifers tan, brown and red camouflaged in Zion Park filter for nature’s emotions heat’s scourge grows water’s passion flows sandstorm wind blows yet I am not enraged only engraved uninfected, merely reflective poetic words pouring from my cracks aged by time refined by nature’s whims from dust I came and dusty fate awaits aging poet weathered sandstone

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Date: 1/5/2012 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on not one but two poems making it through the first round. A well deserved honor.
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Date: 1/4/2012 10:16:00 AM
ALL THE BEST FOR THE FINALS...CAROLINE..MY GOOD WISHES..WITH THIS SUPERB ENTRY OF URS
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Date: 1/4/2012 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest X 2. Wishing you the best in the finals Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2011 8:33:00 PM
I missed this first time around..wow..sure to do well..you aging poet you..lol...love..LNC
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Date: 12/28/2011 5:35:00 PM
wow, awesome, CArolyn. NO wonder it got thru to round two of the big contest. You got two through like me. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/28/2011 4:56:00 PM
Congratulations on making the cut twice Carolyn. I don't remember this one. It copuld easily be the winner. Good luck. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/28/2011 2:59:00 PM
Congrats on this one making the cut. LOve, daver
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Date: 10/3/2011 7:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2011 7:11:00 AM
Carolyn~Congratulations on this reflective and somber write. I love the symbolism of your life to sandstone...we are all worn yet shaped by our elements...when Christ shapes us, we turn out to be adorning statues of His image preserved for all of time. I am thankful that even tho my bones return to dust I am resurrected anew. I believe the same for you, dear friend. I truly do. Blessings this day. It can be an awesome week! Gwendolen
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Date: 10/2/2011 8:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!====Lori
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Date: 10/2/2011 7:09:00 PM
Suck in life force, rise from your bed, be as well as Jesus said, yes i know, i rabbit on, want your sickness, to begone, instead, Don
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Date: 10/2/2011 2:16:00 PM
You write so deeply well about a particularly sacred spot in my universe.. This one has special meaning for me. Thanks so much for sharing it with me and for supporting my contest. Beauty day, Namaste~N
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Date: 9/27/2011 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2011 4:40:00 PM
Congrats Carolyn on the feature. Picturesque. Vince
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Date: 9/26/2011 4:32:00 PM
Love the title. Nice write!
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Date: 9/26/2011 3:03:00 AM
Such a reflective and intruiging scribe Carolyn, good seeing your feature with it..!
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:39:00 PM
i love sandstones; one of my high school gangs was called such.. thanks for info regarding thier other qualities.. a ral fine piece with great phrasing and mood! winning material... :) huggs, nette
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 7/31/2011 2:40:00 PM
* their*, *real* fine
Date: 7/30/2011 6:40:00 PM
Sandstone does indeed have fine attributes, especially as a filter for water. I think Catie will be bowled over with this fine piece. Good luck Carolyn. <*> I'm fine, looking forward to October when I will have a clearer picture to take the next step in my life. Today I felt a little down, I hope it doesn't continue , James xx <*>
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Date: 7/30/2011 3:28:00 PM
this sure is an interesting and also informative poem, Carolyn! I also really liked how you ended this on a meaningful note-- thank you for your comments in my stone poem, I guess that write stemmed from something way back, but yup, we could try to be stable despite everything... thanks again and hugs
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Date: 7/29/2011 11:05:00 AM
Lovely and informative write, Carolyn
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Date: 7/29/2011 9:54:00 AM
Carolyn, I just love your entry for Catie's contest your ending is just sublime.. awesome stuff my friend.. lfde Wilma
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Date: 7/28/2011 9:07:00 PM
You give a wonderful view of the ancient sandstone. Love the last 4 lines.
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Date: 7/28/2011 6:17:00 PM
Awesome write Carolyn ! I'm that T Y P E (of) G U Y ! Loved this natures inspiration love ! Later girlie ! Much love, james
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Date: 7/28/2011 5:09:00 PM
Fine comparison. I have to think of looking down on the Grand Canyon, how things weather, wither away until, actually, if you look with your heart, you may see something grand even in some extremely old person. Well, I'm just getting this from reading your poem. It does communicate. Love, daver
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Date: 7/28/2011 4:00:00 PM
Wonderful creative writing today Carolyn. A winner to me. Hope all is going well with you and your doctors. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol
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