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Weathered

Blasts jet with resistance true Spiking miles above my head Raging ages surge right through Begging me to fly instead Pea-soup greens splash in the sky Behind roiling charcoal force Even angels question why Disdain never bleeds remorse Brace to cut torture's caress Tremulous treads guide me on To proudly fight doom's distress Until flesh gets rendered gone Piercing spikes of sand shred skin Kicked about by tantrum swells Wailing like a violin Harpies toss exhaustion spells Cartilage snaps in my chest As my sails get torn to shreds Earth's soil greets me back as guest While rolling, the murk embeds In the chaos sparks appear Stirring up like bits of dust To pull me away from fear Energies consumed by trust Lifting from my weathered shell Up through the heart of the storm No tears as I bid farewell Nestled in my divine swarm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/22/2009 8:27:00 AM
John - Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Christie’s contest – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/6/2009 3:13:00 PM
Congraulations with your Honorable Mention...Raul
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Date: 1/6/2009 1:36:00 PM
I wrote you. . =)
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Date: 1/6/2009 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations John on your win in Christie and Nigel's contest! Awesome write and well deserved! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/6/2009 10:42:00 AM
Very vivid, great use of imagery. God bless and congrats on your win! :) Amy
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Date: 1/6/2009 8:29:00 AM
Well deserving to be among the winning poems! Congratulations on this wonderful poem! ~Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/4/2009 7:10:00 PM
Thank for the comment. . Nice poem btw!! I love you!! Night. .
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Date: 1/4/2009 6:11:00 PM
great poetry. Piercing spikes of sand shred skin - great way of using words. once again man excellent poetry- james
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Date: 1/4/2009 4:54:00 PM
THIS IS GREAT POETRY, reminds me of edgar allan poe a little and reads so well. enjoyed reading it. Dont laugh at my poem BABYS.... [SMILE]
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Date: 12/31/2008 9:48:00 AM
The language you use in this piece is amazing, well crafted and it flows well. Wonderful write! Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/31/2008 9:38:00 AM
Magnificent language, rhyme and flow... excellent phrasing and imagery. Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/31/2008 9:23:00 AM
i like...nice write...very touching... *Breana
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