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Weather Pleasure

I woke up this morning to the sound of you Tapping my window pane, I looked outside and saw the dew from the lullaby you played. Throughout the night You put me to rest with your rhythmic beat, And much to my delight, I enjoyed every bit of it. You showered me with pleasure, And ensured I fell asleep, You made me love the weather From beneath the comfort of my sheets. The coldness of your touch, Sent shivers down my spine, No one will know just how much You're playing on my mind So now that you've kissed me, And sang me that lullaby, You've made me so happy, That I can't go back to being dry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/22/2011 6:04:00 PM
You have a lot of talent, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.. feel free to let me know when you have another poem up.. welcome to PS. Take care
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Date: 10/3/2011 10:39:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Donella. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2011 1:31:00 AM
This is soo whimsical and light. Love how the weather flirts with you in this fun write. ...Considered an electric blanket? ha ha. Best to you, Gwendolen
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Date: 10/2/2011 7:32:00 PM
Nice combination of love and nature. Good write
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Donella Hosten
Date: 10/2/2011 7:41:00 PM
Thank You

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