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Weather Forecast 2018

Less hazy fog in my brain and condensation on my eye frames more dew for my dry eyes and less salty floods for when I cry more rain for my parched mouth and less humidity on my leather couch less ice between heart beats and less long winds for when I speak more warmth for my cold hands and less dust devils on my ceiling fans less funnel cakes landing on my plate more popcorn showers in their wake less frostbite on my nose while thawing out my ten frozen toes more lightning bugs to help me see and less thunder bolts that make me flee less snow drifts that are sky high more rainbows that make me sigh less clouds in my family tree and more sunshine for you and me. 1-1-2018

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/3/2018 12:33:00 AM

Belated congrats on this fun take on the weather challenge contest, Cheryl.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/3/2018 8:35:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Line; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/31/2018 4:23:00 PM

Hi Cheryl, Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/31/2018 7:40:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Alexis; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/31/2018 12:06:00 PM

lets hope for long periods of sunshine in our lives and no dull grey teary days. Congrats on your win Che:-) hugs jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/31/2018 7:39:00 PM

Yes, definitely lets hope for more sunshine;…Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Jan; Appreciate it!~hugs Che xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/31/2018 7:56:00 AM

A well thought out piece of poetry Cheryl. Congrats on your win Regards Tom.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/31/2018 8:29:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Tom; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/31/2018 12:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest, Cheryl, I loved this piece and your optimistic outlook. Viv x

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/31/2018 8:28:00 AM

Thanks so much for placing me as one of the third place winners and kind congrats Viv; I enjoyed writing this for the contest…Appreciate it Viv!~Che :)

John Gondolf

Date: 1/1/2018 7:49:00 PM

Very nice, Cheryl, I like the last line the best. Good luck in the contest. John

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/1/2018 8:26:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit John; Appreciate the encouragement!~Che :)

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2018 2:27:00 PM

You can prepare a pretty picnic, but you cant ptedict the weather... Enjoyed your poem.. Good luck in the contest...

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/1/2018 5:10:00 PM

Very true Silent One; thanks so much for very kind comment and visit; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Dm Babbit

Date: 1/1/2018 10:32:00 AM

May the sun always be warm and inviting in this New Year.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/1/2018 10:49:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit DM; Happy New Year to you too!~Che :)