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Snow crispy sparkling icy branches too heavy stars twinkle above

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Silent One

Date: 1/5/2024 12:05:00 PM

Another haiku with photographic imagery.. you capture the moment so well..

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/5/2024 12:46:00 PM

ty SO I enjoy haiku it is a style I like can be hard to get right hugs Shadow

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/5/2024 10:16:00 AM

Nicely penned, Haiku, dear Shadow. You perfectly conveyed the beauty of sparkling icy twigs twinkling in sync with the stars.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/5/2024 12:41:00 PM

ty Sotto pleased you like it hugs Shadow

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/5/2024 3:39:00 AM

Snow has its beauty, but it can have its downfalls especially here where we are not prepared for it. I like the quiet to silence when it falls. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/5/2024 4:24:00 AM

hi Sara winter is bleak roll on spring I like looking at snow from indoors ty for your kind comments hugs Shadow

Ink Empress

Date: 1/5/2024 12:01:00 AM

So beautiful and well written haiku this is dear shadow. I love how picturesque it is, and the sparkling snow youve described here is beyond magical along with stars that twinkle. Pleasure reading your stunning haiku. So much depth in this especially “icy branches too heavy” sending you light always