Get Your Premium Membership

''We Will Dance Again'' Premiere Contest Winner

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Constance La France.


This is the story of a real murder . . . I was just five years old and was in my bedroom playing, we had just moved into to this cozy little basement apartment; mommy was talking to a man, who was yelling something about money, then everything went quiet and I came to see what was happening. Mommy was laying on the floor with eyes like my dolls, lifeless, and this man I had seen before was standing there; I ran to mommy, "wake up mommy wake up!" But she was so still, the man told me he would take me to my daddy who lived not far. Crying and weeping for my mommy and daddy loudly, the man told me to, "shut up!" But I couldn't I was afraid; he stopped the car near a huge field and pulled me out shouting, I dropped my teddy on the side of the road and I was fighting him. When mommy did not show up for work the police came, they found her body and knew she had been murdered; an amber alert was issued for me (but I was already long dead), after three days they found my lifeless body in that rural field. Hundreds gathered for our funeral, family and strangers, there was music and dancing because we loved to dance; the talkers were full of thoughts and memories and even poems, me and mommy were united in life and would be forever in death. The man had dragged me into the field and I was yelling, yelling for daddy to come and then he stopped my voice; he put his hands on my throat and then threw my small body, as I lay there looking up with dead eyes- there was a rainbow. I saw a double rainbow and then my beautiful mommy, was holding me, I asked her why that man murdered us, she told me, "because I owed him money and I made a mistake," our spirits will live on she said, but we will not rest in peace yet, she whispered, "soon, my daughter we will dance again in heaven . . . " _______________________________ August 12, 2016 Poetry/Narrative/"We Will Dance Again" Copyright Protected, ID 16-817-954-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the Premiere contest, Through Their Eyes #2 sponsor, Shadow Hamilton First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/29/2018 1:36:00 AM
Wow this is so beautiful in such a dark way, this brushed a lot of emotion upon me, you are someone that im excited to see more of.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/17/2016 10:19:00 PM
This is superb, chilly and exciting and so touching...Congrats on your 1st place. :) Sunita
Login to Reply
Date: 8/17/2016 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations Constance!
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/17/2016 9:05:00 AM
I think you told the story well.
Date: 8/17/2016 8:56:00 AM
Wow Constance you really pulled on the heart strings with this one. That was a horrific murder, is this the one in Calgary recently? must be it is so similar. Well done, you made me relive those terrible moments when the amber alert went out and the heartbreak when they found her. Great write and great win!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/17/2016 8:54:00 AM
very powerful poem of great depth Connie congrats on your 1st place hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 8/17/2016 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations BW, which came first, the poem or the picture? Well done either way.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/17/2016 7:20:00 AM
Broken Wings, what a wonderful tribute to such a tragic story. The teddy bear photo you posted leaves a further layer, an image in my head. Wow, lady! Great work! Hugs.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/16/2016 7:20:00 PM
Hi BW, This poem was so sad. It brought tears to my eyes. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. A Big Seven:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Date: 8/13/2016 9:08:00 AM
Love this Broken Wings, good luck! :)-luloo
Login to Reply
Date: 8/13/2016 7:56:00 AM
Wonderful perspective you have used here BW. It gives the piece an eerie almost foreboding quality. I wrote one but it was too long so I didn't enter it.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/13/2016 6:06:00 AM
Chilling. How cruel some people can be..Well written:)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/13/2016 12:01:00 AM
Wow, how emotional , excellent write. Really got to me
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs