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We Whisper

Like prayers adrift In candles’ glow, Our whispers rise, In reverent tones: Soft coos of love And futures guessed, A treacly void Of nightfall words While, sapped, you lie With weary face, Our newborn son Upon your breast— Hush, you whisper … He sleeps. November 17, 2017 Whisper Sweet Nothings Poetry Contest Julie Leigh Rodeheaver, Sponsor

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Date: 11/23/2017 2:37:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, David - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 11/19/2017 10:39:00 PM
Very sweet. Lovely twist. Congrats.
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Date: 11/17/2017 4:57:00 PM
This is very nice. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 11/17/2017 4:17:00 PM
Beautiful, such imagery.
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Date: 11/17/2017 2:47:00 PM
- Lovely written, David - They are so cute when they sleep ... hush ... - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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