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We Were Poetry

We were poetry beautiful verses bound together on soft breezes of love and desire but sadly now nothing more than yesterday’s stanza’s torn and scattered on the winds drifting slowly apart

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Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 2/16/2017 2:13:00 PM

So sad and heartbreaking. Lovely poetry Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 2:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Elizabeth, I am happy you liked this one.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/16/2017 2:02:00 PM

Sad and so very well expressed, Chris. May the soft breezes return to you.

Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 2:04:00 PM

Thank you so much my sweet friend. I do appreciate you Heidi.

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/16/2017 1:24:00 PM

Nicely said Chris...a poetic breeze...god bless...^WW^

Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 1:27:00 PM

Thanks so very much my friend.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 2/16/2017 12:18:00 PM

So sad, maybe, but you have subsequently gathered those "yesterday's stanzas" into beautiful poems of today having learned by experience, I suppose.

Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 12:21:00 PM

I suppose. :) Thanks so much my friend, I guess some of these stanzas will just linger with me. I appreciate your kindness.

Darren White

Date: 2/16/2017 12:01:00 PM

Oh, so beautiful Chris. Sometimes, like your own favourite about the ripple and the shore, your poems are one shot of power and emotion. This is one of them. Meloves.

Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 12:04:00 PM

Thanks so very much Darren, I did write this in the same style and fashion of the other poem you mentioned. (I call them Compact Poetry) I am happy you liked it.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/16/2017 11:45:00 AM

so poetic, so heartbreaking Chris:-( hugs Jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 12:03:00 PM

Thank you Jan, that heartbroken feeling is something I know well.