Get Your Premium Membership

We Shared the Moon

We shared the moon. A distant sky and worlds apart, Leaves me stranded with my heart, Oceans weep and lap the shore, Emotions spill like a bleeding pore. Memories swell, bob and flow, Of happy times so long ago. But now we’re lost to lives anew, The sea and sky looks much too blue. I picture you still young in my mind, I hope the years have been so kind. The time slips by and all too soon, I remember when we shared the moon. A time long lost in youths embrace, A tender kiss on your angelic face. Moonlight shines and sparkles the sea, I wonder do you ever think of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/14/2013 4:38:00 PM
This is a poem of romance and nostalgia Longing for the days of young love days gone by nice job
Login to Reply
De Burca Avatar
Seosamh De Burca
Date: 10/15/2013 5:10:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem and taking the time to comment.
Date: 6/1/2013 2:33:00 PM
awe, Seosamh, CONGRATS on your romantic win! ;-) ~SKAT~
Login to Reply
De Burca Avatar
Seosamh De Burca
Date: 6/1/2013 7:26:00 PM
Thank you for your kind wishes.
Date: 6/1/2013 10:48:00 AM
Hello Seosamh..' Congratulaitons on the win..! about the title though..' Look in these days of international brinkmanship)) what will the American government think..' sharing the moon' L O L... anyway..well done..'
Login to Reply
De Burca Avatar
Seosamh De Burca
Date: 6/1/2013 7:26:00 PM
LOL, I didn't think of that. Thank you for the comment and taking the time to read my poem.
Date: 6/1/2013 10:03:00 AM
Seosamh,,,, CONGRATULATIONS :-)* Thank you for the nice and sweet romantic poem... pin points the watering passion thirst I seek. Always & Forever..... PD
Login to Reply
Date: 5/24/2013 1:41:00 PM
SEOSAMH, congratulations with your winning poem, in the "Incurable Romantic" contest... ~xox* Linda
Login to Reply
De Burca Avatar
Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/25/2013 4:12:00 PM
Thank you Linda for your kind words and encouragement to enter the contests.
Date: 5/23/2013 8:06:00 PM
wonderful write Seosamh...congrats on your win
Login to Reply
De Burca Avatar
Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/25/2013 4:13:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read, best wishes and comment on my poem.
Date: 4/25/2013 9:23:00 PM
Seosamh, your verse goes very far. I am sure she think of you, your heart is filled with the right kind of passion...xox...pd
Login to Reply
De Burca Avatar
Seosamh De Burca
Date: 4/29/2013 1:00:00 AM
Thank you PD for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 4/17/2013 8:03:00 AM
I liked this .
Login to Reply
De Burca Avatar
Seosamh De Burca
Date: 4/20/2013 9:11:00 AM
Thanks John for taking the time to read and comment its appreciated.
Date: 4/12/2013 5:09:00 PM
This is a wonderfully flowing poem and very romantic. We often wonder just this about past loves. With a heart as romantic as yours I am sure you are well remembered.
Login to Reply
De Burca Avatar
Seosamh De Burca
Date: 4/13/2013 12:44:00 PM
Thank you for your gracious comments and reading my poem
Date: 4/12/2013 5:04:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely poem - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
De Burca Avatar
Seosamh De Burca
Date: 4/12/2013 1:46:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem, its greatly appreciated.

Book: Shattered Sighs