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We Shall Go On

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We Shall Go On

Road to Conviction
Lips kissed so tender
hands held to heart
My mind racing

Oh how did I get here?
I answered and let you in
You spoke and I trembled
Sweet thereafter come near

Color so rampant 
Across my vision 
Invades this space
Heart so free

Race to the meadow
Green and fresh
Sweet smell lingers
My thoughts as pixels

Paint the canvas
unclear blue and red
wildly thrust
upon my breast

I will recall
As charming ladies do
The feeling and longing
We shall go on

Athena Charlotte

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  1. Date: 10/6/2009 12:17:00 PM
    Athena, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 10/4/2009 1:05:00 PM
    Beautiful write. Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 11:20:00 AM
    Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 11:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/23/2009 4:29:00 PM
    Congratulations on being featured this week, Athena! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 7:41:00 PM
    Athena, congrats on your feature this week...Raul

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 2:49:00 PM
    Congratulations on getting featured this week!

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 10:26:00 AM
    Awesome write here, Athena. Love the "my thoughts as pixels" line ... smile ... beautifully done and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week here at PoetrySoup. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 6:24:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Athena, nice write>>James

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 4:36:00 PM
    Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 6:12:00 AM
    Congrats on your poetry being featured this week… please keep writing… great you Athena! Adeleke

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 3:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Athena. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/16/2009 6:58:00 PM
    Athena, what a lovely name you have! And your writing compliments it. Thanks for sharing this tender work. Carolyn