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We Needed a New Thread

Once, you told me how much you loved me. Once, I believed you said those words sincerely but they soon fell on my deaf ears Empty words without meaning stuffed like useless trifles in jean pockets Your pockets held the things you treasured Spilled, were the thoughts you once had of me. Once, I tried to repair your broken seams but my stitches couldn't hold them together. We needed a new thread, but none would ever be strong enough to mend the rent in our relationship. Once, I thought jean pockets were useful. Not those that refuse my needle and thread. No mending could ever keep lost love safe. You didn't think ours was worth keeping deep inside the flat fell seams of your blue jeans pocket. NOTE* In sharing emails this morning, the thread had gotten so long that I was having trouble following it in proper order, so I said, "We need a new thread," to which David K replied, "That could make a great title for a poem..." This is the result.

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Date: 3/16/2023 4:18:00 AM
Jenna, I love the concept! Seemingly, the metaphor of a pocket for a heart. The title is indeed great for in and of itself, it bears thought and interpretation! I hope you've been well, Happy Thursday xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/16/2023 5:50:00 AM
Morning, Mike and thank you for understanding the concept. I’ve been very well, just a bit disenchanted with soup. I’m still around. Thanks for asking.
Date: 3/13/2023 1:59:00 AM
Lol, even I was getting a bit confused yesterday on who said what and when, blame Marks snow pic. Tom
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Date: 3/13/2023 2:29:00 AM
LOL Tom. That amount of snow was mind boggling! We never know what's going to serve as thought for a poem. I'm glad David picked up on my simple phrase. Thanks for being here. Another short sleep night for me.
Date: 3/12/2023 7:03:00 PM
Perfect response to David's comment Jenna. You are brilliant! :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/12/2023 7:34:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, Linda.
Date: 3/12/2023 12:14:00 PM
Fascinating lines Jenna Because I presume sincere and heartfelt Absolutely love We need a new thread To mend the RENT in our relationship Truly great original use or dare I say A new thread of language Fave
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/12/2023 7:34:00 PM
Oh, Christopher, how sweet that you did that! Thank you, and you never need ask to write something in gratitude, but you're a gentleman for thinking that. I'll find it to read.
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 3/12/2023 5:03:00 PM
Sorry Jenna Come to think of it now I should have really asked for your permission 1st. But I wrote a poem in gratitude and thanks to you. I only used your 1st name and if you don't like it tell me and I will take it down and delete it
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/12/2023 12:31:00 PM
What excellent comments, Christopher. I am truly happy to read your review. Thanks!
Date: 3/12/2023 10:18:00 AM
Damn you beat me to it Jenna, the story of my life lol, I can’t believe or perhaps I can, that you put this one together with your own prompt, that went over your head til I pointed it out, to repeat what Angela said this one really is different and metaphorically deep, just like those bottomless pockets, cheers David
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Date: 3/12/2023 10:27:00 AM
You have me laughing, David. Sometimes, I'm too competitive but it's all about the fun, not beating each other. I think I may add the explanation for this one on the bottom of the verses, if that's ok with you. If I don't hear back from you in 10 seconds, I'll do it anyway. LOL Now, it's your turn. Clock's ticking.

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