We Dance

Faintly rustled within as you flow and move me much like a soft warm breeze touching leaves in a tree you, me, and the wind, dance. Lee carter Mystique contest 7/8/15 #1- connection with a supreme source

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2015 11:55:00 PM

Awesome pen Lee! Superb write n great win ! Big congrats!

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/26/2015 4:36:00 PM

I enjoyed the imagery of your poem, Lee. Congrats on your win!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/25/2015 6:41:00 PM

love it Lee congrats on 1st hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2015 4:59:00 PM

this is extremely beautiful - the flow is absolutely delightful - it dances on the page Lee:-) many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 7/25/2015 3:12:00 PM

Lee, congrats on your win. SKAT

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/25/2015 1:42:00 PM

Lee, I love the way you connect with the supreme source! This poem deserves your top placement. Kudos!

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/25/2015 12:45:00 PM

Oh...a beaut! Congratulations, Lee! hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2015 10:56:00 AM

this is absolutely gorgeous, Lee!!! The last few lines I especially love.

Elaine George

Date: 7/12/2015 7:01:00 PM

Beautiful! Lee. Sincerely, Elaine C. George

Constance La France

Date: 7/9/2015 7:53:00 PM

Lee, beautifully penned 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, this is a story ...

Eve Roper

Date: 7/9/2015 8:16:00 AM

Love your poem a 7 hugs eve

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/9/2015 12:13:00 AM

As connections with a supreme source goes, this makes a refreshing change from the usual metaphors, Lee- a lovely, lilting, gentle communion. Well done, and best wishes for the contest. Viv x