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We Counted You As Family

The tears burn my skin as they stream down my face Dripping slowly to the floor Crashing and shattering on impact Just as the many pieces of my broken heart have done You betrayed all of us It did not matter that we loved you as our own, as family Like a thief with no thought of the consequences You stole something so precious You took away the innocence of my child Crushing it as if it were nothing more than dirt beneath your feet You show no remorse for what you have done Only sadness for the verdict that will send you away An animal is what you are Stalking your prey and gaining their trust Using their faith against them Luring your victim into your clutches Then taking away the life that is within them Even the title of child rapist is too kind for you My beliefs are stained by the blackness of your soul My heart is hardened by your selfishness The evil inside of you has demolished something within me Yet it has not consumed me You have no respect for the unity that we tried to share with you We were merely a stomping ground for your greed and lust Nothing you do can replace what you have taken from us No pain that you suffer can compare to the agony you have caused us You cared nothing for the laws of men or God My faith is lost to many because of men like you I can’t help but wonder how anyone could be so cruel Copyright © 2010 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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Date: 2/8/2011 8:19:00 PM
What a grim dark picture you have painted here with your descriptive words. Good presentation.
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Date: 3/6/2010 9:15:00 PM
Hey, Lena, I never stopped to congratulate you for your win with this one. good for you! Luv,Andrea
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Date: 2/26/2010 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Starflixer's Betrayal contest Lena . Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2010 1:02:00 PM
Dear Lena, My congratulations on your win in the "Betrayal" Contest. I hope you and your family are doing well. God bless.
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Date: 2/25/2010 12:30:00 PM
In my opinion this is absolutely the worst type of betrayal to experience. That said, I'm glad your poem received well-deserved recognition in the contest, Lolita! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/25/2010 12:25:00 PM
Congrats Lolita on your winning poem in the Betrayal contest.. a moving poem .. a wonderful win for a wonderful write and a wonderful poet too..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/10/2010 3:07:00 AM
Very touchy and powerful, Lolita! Tank you for your kind comment on Rescue of Dreams..Love, Gert
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Date: 2/1/2010 2:34:00 PM
Profound writing here Lena ... how brave of you to tackle this subject and be true to the rage !! I'm all for bringing back castration myself ... but I guess with pedophiles it often doesn't go that far and any touching is out of bounds so just keep them locked up FOREVER is about the only way. Love you ....
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:45:00 PM
Powerful poetry Lolita on a subject so hurtful but u have related the story with emotional conviction... I AM BACK!!! Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/29/2010 5:37:00 PM
Oh so much pain. Keep using the pen to release it dear. Thank you so much for taking the time to read muy poetry. Hope you have a great day!
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Date: 1/29/2010 2:34:00 PM
This is a heartwrenching poem, heartfelt indeed.. pain..Charma
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Date: 1/28/2010 12:21:00 PM
Soup mail for you. Lightwalker
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Date: 1/28/2010 12:20:00 PM
Dear Lena, thank you for sharing your heart through this piece. If in this poem you think that the justice system was easy with this person, take consolation in the fact that they WILL have their day before God who does not look kindly on one's injustice to another. Your friend , Lightwalker
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Date: 1/28/2010 8:27:00 AM
pardon the pun "Lolita" it must take more than pen and paper to relieve some of this you speek. and thank you for your blog comment on my piece. john
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Date: 1/28/2010 4:42:00 AM
This is a sad write on a topic that needs to be out there because the more aware the public is about this the less it will happen and people get by with it. Of course, this person was probably molested also. I hope that this wasn't your family. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 1/27/2010 1:01:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this Lena...I know you all are hurting...My prayers are with you...You have soup mail....Marty
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Date: 1/27/2010 10:45:00 AM
Such a brave write, you have my respect Daniel and a big thanks for having the time to read my work.
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Date: 1/27/2010 7:52:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Lena.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/27/2010 7:04:00 AM
Gosh, Lena, and he was like family. It truly is the worst kind of betrayal. I think you wrote a similar poem earlier on this topic? This one really shows the depths of your sorrow . Very heartfelt and sad. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/26/2010 7:57:00 PM
This would make an incredible entry for the betrayal contest, Lolita. To me, there is no greater betrayal than what you have described here. I hope the sentence matches the severity of the crime. God bless you; I wish I could take away some of your pain. And yet, you are such a good, caring person. I'm glad this didn't "consume you." Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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